12 octobre 2009
*I don't understand it either*
Days.
It all started in the dark
The stars were glowing in my head
Embracing the night breeze
I felt life beating in your hands.
We were beautiful and we were strong
Celebrating the love of passing feelings
The short-lived existences
The millions of people we were at once.
Then the morning came to me
Breaking out from your blue eyes
Terrible fragility I cherrished
Like a warm hug before twilight.
We were young and we were new
Unsure of the path to go through
Trying to swim against the current
Before letting ourselves go to the ocean.
And the sun was high when I understood
Some stories aren’t worth remembering
I could have cried blood, tears and rain
If I didn’t already dry out long ago.
We weren’t anything no more,
Just two shadows, two strangers
A dirty picture on the floor
A nightmare I had to overcome.
Then there was the chill evening dying to end
And to dig into the comforting darkness
When a dazzling blinding light flashed
And drew me away from my self-built misery.
We aren’t really what we were meant to be
Chasing the moon and clouds in blue skies
Lost in translation and impassable distances
But whatever will be we’ll face it together.
The next night
Is gonna be allright.
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critiques/commentaires/corrections!
i really like this, very outdoors-y/nature vocabulary!
few corrections: "terrible fragility I CHERISHED"
"we weren't anything no more" - we weren't anything anymore, we were nothing anymore, we were no longer anything
C'est tout!
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